Family at Heart

Family at Heart

A Poem by missJRed
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got inspired with the new friends I made at work, lived together for a short period of time but made a "family" in them :)

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Met as strangers; reunited in a crib by fate
Our life is a sketchbook that we always update
Started as friends, ended up as family
Like a flower, each one is lovely

Everyday is a memory we always treasure
Expect to see us all smiling that's for sure
Standing strong during our ups and downs
Each one is crazy and one doesn't have to frown

Life is bitchy at times and we have to sigh
But everything doesn't need to end up in goodbye
Have our own decisions and destiny will decide
Just go with the rythm and simply enjoy the ride

Fate kept us intact and in time would keep us apart
Countless memories we'll cherish deep in our hearts
Let goodbye be a bridge to another hello
Aiming for a happy heart to finally let go

© 2013 missJRed


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I think that family found in friends is sometimes the best family you could ask for. I like the intentions that you had with this poem. I feel that the rhymes effect the flow a bit and don't seem natural. But I still think its cute

Posted 6 Years Ago


missJRed

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much M :)

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I'm just someone who enjoys writing random stuffs. I find joy in writing. I'm not a pro but rather a newbie. It'll be my joy to have some constructive criticisms. It's my dream to be a good write.. more..

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