Sweet Intentions

Sweet Intentions

A Poem by Kate

Sweet intentions, your best intentions,
But they haven't worked.
There's a gaping hole inside of me and it's shaped just like you,
Sucking out my insides bit by bit
Until there's nothing left.
I know you never meant to,
But you did,
Clawing at my insides until there's nothing left.

© 2009 Kate


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out of these statements it is the last one which applies to this poem.
i like the thing about a hole in you the shape of someone.
that is some shittttttt hot imagery sweetheart
your fit, and so's your hair and nose and eyes and mind and poems
keep it going
you'll go far
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Southampton, United Kingdom



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