Sunday Morning.

Sunday Morning.

A Poem by Kate
"

on the pavement, a phone, screen cracked but ringing still, still ringing....

"

On the pavement, a phone

Screen cracked but ringing still, still ringing,

Tinny voices calling to the sun

On the pavement

the conversation with a loved one, dying.

 

On the pavement, nestled beneath leaves, a shoe

Heel broken and leather scuffed,

Small flakes of fake black curling in the sun

On the pavement

the smell of familiar skin, dying.

 

On the pavement, a condom

Used and wet, split open by the small grey stones,

Creamy liquid drying in the sun

On the pavement,

the life of an unborn child, dying.

© 2010 Kate


Author's Note

Kate
This is a ramble about what the streets outside say a club, or a pub or whatever, look like early Sunday morning. I'm not too sure I like the rigidity of the structure.

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i only have time for one right now. i picked this. it's short. t's also very good. very 'gritty realist'. kinda the scene i'm digging. i enjoyed. it's good from start to end. good show. xx

Posted 14 Years Ago


Would be a sad morning to find a unborn child. Poem moved like music. I like the story. The description was very good to a poem with a sad poem that does happen in this life in many places.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Southampton, United Kingdom



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