Oh,no!

It's quintessentially a children's poem mainly about Molly worrying about her mishaps during her ballet recital. I do have illustrations i'll upload them when possible.

 Oh,no

Does mummy know,

That I did so,

Standing in my row,

Unable to dance with the flow

Oh,no

Does mummy know,

That I did so,

I wrecked my bow,

The one she had to sew

Oh,no

Mummy does know,

That I did so,

It made me feel low,

Now, with no where to go.

 

Oh, no!

 

 

                                     

Author's Note

i know it childish but haha i wrote this in school during my eng. exam :)

Reviews

[Andrea]

lol. i can just imagine u giggling to urself as u wrote this, mit. :D

[manda]

snicker. ohmycrud! what in crud's name is MITHRRA doing here? snicker. heh. i decided to grace your boring old poem with my unboring young self. :) running ink is coming your way baby! go read my blog. and update yours. urm. since this is a place for reviews, i shall review.

it's weird. not weird in a bad way, but like. weird. just weird. it's sorta like. i donno. your grammars wrong by the way. the it made me feel low. it should be it makes me feel low. cuzza everything else is in present tense. i think. :P

it wasn't too bad. since this is LOOOONG. drop me an equally long line next time kay?

p/s : you're my front cover maker person! manda's my beta reader! and the rest are my audience. CONGRATS woman! and and and. i'll think about letting you be in your languid movements. :)