Rain Falls

Rain falls to quench the thirst of my soul

 

Rain falls to splash through the rivers and flow across the earth

 

Rain falls to calm the throbbing of my head

 

Rain falls to drown the dying flowers with life

 

Rain falls to soak through my hair and drench my clothes

 

Rain falls to darken the sky with clouds

 

Rain falls to let the world know I am crying because I lost you

                                

 

 

 

 

 

    -Mizuki Tsukiakari 

 

 

Author's Note

It's a feeling just about everyone can relate to atmsome point in life, right?

Reviews

[Rose Tyler]

Short, but to the point. A lost friend, love, family member, anyone is hard to deal with.. xx

[Dr.Who.LOVER]

Really good. It was short but thats okay. I think you did a really good job with this. I loved everything about it. Keep up the good work


-VampireChick

[Denni]

*sighs with longing* i love the rain

[Bodhisattva]

Really amazing I feel the lost and is a beautiful way to say it. Rain could be seen as sadness but it might be a way to clean something and it might clean away the sadness from someone.

[Ashimoto]

Practically everyone has lost one of their loved ones and most of them can relate to this poem. Beautiful poem, by the way. I am quite fond of the rain so the title caught my eyes. :)

[TransparentHearts]

Just about everyone can relate to this and it's a beautifully written poem, in my opinion. Nice job (:

[Cassiopia Summers]

I like this sister. (: I think everybody has been through this.

[Leanne Conway]

Awe, this is so sad. I love this poem.
It's beautiful and written wonderfully.
I can relate to this in many different ways.
A father-lost
3best friends-lost
etc..

[Sarah>_>]

I love rain :3
I like this!
Btw, nice fake Japanese name.

[Daydreamer54]

Wow so sad! I lobve the poeticness and the somewhat dramatic parts in this! Great write! :)