Lonliness

You are not holding me in your arms

I can't hear your voice

Your hand has not come to reach out for me

As I drown in the ocean

Dark, Blue, Deep, Black

I'm drowning in the life I have without you

Your love for me, knowing you'll come back

Is the air that I breath

I'm gasping for air

I'm suffocating

Because the ocean water is erasing the air

Because the lonliness is replacing your love for me

 

Drowning

In my desolate lonliness

 

Drowning

In the life I have without you

 

Because the lonliness is replacing your love for me

Because the cold ocean water is erasing the air

 

If you say it, I won't drown

If...you say...you...love me...

Then I won't...

 

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                           -Mizuki Tsukiakari

 

 

 

 

 

 

You didn't say it.

 

Reviews

[Jetta Zippora]

Wow. Very strong and darkly beautiful. I like this style. Great write, friend :)

[Hello, Goodbye]

Love the candor even if im sure you dont appreciate the spoken feeling. Loneliness can be worse than actual physical pain for emotional wounds take longer to heal. Its a feeling of suffocation while having nothing surround you.. a feeling that honestly I don't fondly recall.


Great stuff..

[Alice N.]

it was rwally good and thats how i feel alot but my bf never say that so this was cool you really are an amazing writer well cant wait to keep reading and hope you have a happy relation in your future

[Liz]

It's different. In a good way. I love it.

[HereWithoutYou<3]

It's awesome, I've been there and it's really good.

[Cassiopia Summers]

I wasn't expecting this, it's good. It's different, and I like it. (: Great write.