Rain is Precious

Rain is Precious

A Poem by Mizuki Tsukiakari

Rain is tears, wet and cold


Life is precious, to young and old


Rain is tears, falling from the darkness


Life is precious, cruel and heartless.



Mizuki Tsukiakari

© 2013 Mizuki Tsukiakari


Author's Note

Mizuki Tsukiakari
I don't like calling this a poem. I prefer to call it a quote, since it's written as a quote in my poem book. I absolutely love it! It came to me randomly in Geometry...Hope you like it!

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A poem, quote or prose. Whatever it may be it is very good. Do you mind if I quote you as a Facebook status? I love this piece, it is really good.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Mizuki Tsukiakari

6 Years Ago

Sure, feel free to quote me as a Facebook status, just as long as my pen name is in there somewhere .. read more
Oh, Geometry. that's where I write lots of my poems. This is amazing. We treasure that which hurts us. well done. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Such truth, lovely indeed, short, but sweet with lyrical, realistic notions ;)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Mizuki Tsukiakari

7 Years Ago

Thanks for the review :)
Castonovia

7 Years Ago

Anytime :p
Brilliant! I love it, friend. Nice write.

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is great, I love it!

Posted 8 Years Ago


It's awesome I really like the " Life is precious, cruel and heartless" XD Awesome!

Posted 9 Years Ago


this is a really great quote! it flows really well and the rhym scheme is great too! Keep writing and im sure you'll do well!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Of course I like it!! I really thought this was great, and it definitely fits you lol, with your thing for rain. (: Wonderful quote, I enjoyed it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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This is poetic brevity.. It holds a mighty punch and the message is resolute and memorable even in its small form.. the structure is precise and its intent well placed. I love it..

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on October 5, 2010
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