Heaven/Hell

Heaven/Hell

A Poem by melril18
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Another Diamante

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Heaven

Beautiful, perfect

Praying, singing, worshinping

God, love, Satan, fire

Hurting, suffering, regretting

Painful, dead

Hell

© 2011 melril18


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Ain't this the truth. I think this one sums up the principles of these two places pretty well. Simply put, Heaven is a place of love, where you're with God. Hell is simply forever without God. I like how this poem uses so few words to express so much. That economy of words is an art in itself.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Ain't this the truth. I think this one sums up the principles of these two places pretty well. Simply put, Heaven is a place of love, where you're with God. Hell is simply forever without God. I like how this poem uses so few words to express so much. That economy of words is an art in itself.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

well
this is quiet a topping
ill have to think about this peace,
strong words you are using,


Posted 12 Years Ago

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I've been told I'm very charismatic. I love God, music, dance, and people. Words fascinate me. I love life and try to make the most of it. And that's me. more..

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