Test Me

Test Me

A Poem by midnight reaper

Test me, you know how this ends
Fight me, you will pay the price
Kill me, I will suffocate you
Your an animal
Rage in your eyes
You fight yourself
Let me in
Let me in
Let me control
Let me control
Your an animal
Rage in your eyes
You fight yourself
Test me
Fight me
Kill me
In the end you suffocate

© 2019 midnight reaper


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You have the right idea for sure.. I like the form! However.. the last statement is either extremely relevant to the speaker or irrelevant.. The second to last statement is " KILL ME " and the last is " In the end you suffocate " You requested your audience to " KILL YOU " We aren't going anywhere.. You are dead if the story lives up to its promises. Good Write! -S

Posted 2 Months Ago



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Added on June 9, 2019
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