The Day

There will always be a day when your smile vanishes and tears start comin down your face.
No one will be around and you'll be all alone.
But you keep fighting.
Then one day your day the breaking point.
You start putting yourself wanting to say goodbye.
But your days will get better.
The smiles will come back.
Then before you know it there will be someone around to annoy you and make you laugh again.
So suck it up butterfly!
There's a whole world waiting.
So what are you waiting for go find yourself better day and explore the world!

Author's Note

Hope you like it!!! :)

Reviews

[Gee]

"So,suck it up butterfly"like this line.Enjoyed your poem,few mistakes,but,hey,who cares!

[Mae Vande Guchte]

Thanks for reading and commenting.

[Gee]

You are most welcome

[Chris]

Almost a synopsis of a Romantic or Gothic novella. There seems to be missing and wrong words and if you are using a conversational style I can accept "comin" vs coming even though an apostrophe is lacking.

[Mae Vande Guchte]

Thanks for commenting your thoughts. I didn't really think anyone would read something mine.

[Chris]

well people here do read if given the chance AND they see things of interest. And you are welcome.