Love Town

This sand like love I always feel Where a gust of wind sift it away

Once upon a time in a town filled with love

A town where YOU are all what a man can think of

 

A town where admiring and adoring grew big

Love from the bottle, like wine we swig

 

Love that made each couple hold tight

Made them promise, there’s no escape without a fight

 

Huge love felt engraving each heart

Love that made them believe from the start

 

Love that wasn’t meant to vanish one day

A true eternal love a one might say

 

With all the ups and downs a one can feel

Still a soul mate there was to heal

 

And all the birds in the sky sang a song

About all the love were made so strong

 

Found my self a place in this little town

A place where she made me wear her crown

 

A special bond wrapped us up in its cocoon

Making life so beautiful like a dune

 

A love that can’t be compared with a summer’s day sky blue

Just as Shakespeare said: "you look as clear as morning roses newly washed with due"

I cherish each moment spent holding ur hand

Moments that made my soul speak of love that wasn’t planned

 

Till a dark cloud filled and covered the place

Covered the light of love that made it hard to see one another's face

 

But a spark of light always lit the place

A spark that showed me ur grace

And although you are not physically next to me, still I feel you are still there

Not a single night without u I can bear

You'll always be a dream that I wish I never wakeup from...

Reviews

[MOON]

Well said , heartfelt.

[samantha munning]

this is truly amazing.
i love it! it really captured my heart

[Kim's Poems]

Goodness, this is amazing,
I love this it's written so well.

[stars are far]

I loved this poem so much..
And your last line putted a nice sweet touch on such a great poem..
So keep that coming :-D