Recreated hell

Recreated hell

A Poem by black_rose_obsession
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for Beryls dark poetry contest

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Locked in a room 4 walls and a door

padded from ceiling to floor

 

Go ahead!

Shove one more pill down my throat!

And you wonder why I just can't cope?!

You shrinks are a joke!

Perscribing NOTHING but false hope...

 

you keep me shrouded in a medicated lie

stealing what once was MY life

Locked in this room

Every hour of every day

The last remrants of reality fade away..

 

I may be alive

 but I might as well be dead!!

Existing only in a world created in my head...

 

Do you think insanity can be cured with isolation??

I'm sorry but your sadly mistaken...

 

You keep me locked in an 8' X 8' cell

 

-!!CONGRATULATIONS!!-

You've recreated hell

© 2009 black_rose_obsession


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Your writing has improved.
Excellent imagery used.

Keep exercising your talent.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Freaking awesome. i love it!!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


I'm so memorizing this and yelling it at my therapists. O.o

Posted 15 Years Ago


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BERYL this should get a ribbon thingy

Posted 15 Years Ago


haha >.< awesome one

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on September 19, 2009

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black_rose_obsession

halloween town, PA, Turkmenistan



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