Fragments

a poem about past relationships...

I picked up the pieces

yet in the end I was wounded

fragments of glass

unforgiving and sharp

piercing through my heart

 

The torn pictures

perfectly cut in half

love is not fair

you got the last laugh

 

Are you happy?

Now you've rid of me

I wish I could forget you

Just as easily

Author's Note

Please rate and review .This is my third poem. Thank you for reading my work.

Reviews

[Nusquam Esse]

It is usually the remaining people who suffer the most from death. I think many people don't commit suicide only out of guilt for how it would affect others. Of course a much greater amount consider their self-worth so low that they do it anyway, thinking no one will miss them. This is a good poem with a personal touch. Good job.

[sonnetmoon]

I am glad that you liked it. Unintentionally I have made this poem personal. My subconscious thoughts and ideas have played a huge part in this poem. I wanted to reach out to my readers and this poem can be interpreted in many different ways. I like your interpretation of my poem Nusquam Esse. Once again thank you for you review.
-sonnetmoon

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the use of glass. Impossible to repair if completely in pieces. I like the internal thoughts leading to the sad ending. Hard to forget the lost of needed love. No weakness in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[sonnetmoon]

I got the idea for this poem by looking at a torn picture. I wanted the reader to feel the pain of the protagonist. Thank you for your review Coyote.
-sonnetmoon

[Perkele.7885]

the mind and heart will tend to linger until a new horizon for emotional attachment comes within their reach and then life goes to restart

[Stephen]

I am impressed. This sounds like I have been there before. I know it is not a nice place to be, but I guess you have to experience this to know you are real... Good Job!!