Time Passes, Friendship Goes?

Time Passes, Friendship Goes?

A Poem by Totoro-Sama
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Can you relate to leaving friends, believing that you will see them again, and holding onto that belief?

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Farewell, Farewell! I'm sure we'll meet again.
Farewell, Farewell! I'm sure it won't be the end.
Like petals scatter,
No one can fully erase the laughter.
Like the velvet-dark night,
Our smiles, the stars, will shine outright. 

I remember ...
Screaming, "it will be all right."
I remember ...
Being a madman, searching for the promises, the false light.

But, now ...
Walking down the road we shared together,
Can I believe in the word: "forever"?

Alone, with only one set of footprints in the sand,
I feel that our meeting is close at hand.

© 2014 Totoro-Sama


Author's Note

Totoro-Sama
Picture Found in Tumblr.
I Am Quite New at this . . so Please go Easy On me.
Comment or don't. I would like some reviews though.

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Very nice. Although it is short it conveys meaning very well and leaves the readers reminiscing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Totoro-Sama

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your praise :D
WeaverOfWords

10 Years Ago

Very welcome. I felt that it was the least I could do to check out some of what you had written. And.. read more
Totoro-Sama

10 Years Ago

Hahaha! Thank you so much ;w;
It was really moving and it made me feel like i was there.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Totoro-Sama

10 Years Ago

Thank you! :D
I'm glad that my humble poem had such an effect!
The picture reminds me of Meiko and Luka for some strange unknown reason. *shrugs* of course everyone should be able to relate to this short, but meaningful poem ^^ I mean, that's the experiences of growing up, loss, but always gaining ^^ unless you're like a hermit and you never had friends. Then that's very sad. Well this poem is sure to make the reader reflect on their old friends, and maybe bring tears to their eyes. Like it did to me... I love how you ended it off with the notion the narrator still has faith in seeing their old friends in the past ^^ but ppl change. For better or worse. I loved this ^^ let me read more of your stuff! Onegaishimasu! (・ω・)ノ

Posted 10 Years Ago


Totoro-Sama

10 Years Ago

Awww. Thank you! I shall work when I have the time! I am so glad you enjoy it!

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Added on March 27, 2014
Last Updated on April 1, 2014
Tags: Time, Friendship, Promise, Belief, Anime