Until We Meet Again

Well Until we meet again you'll be
in my thoughts and prayers
where ever your heart takes you
take care my love, take care...I know
you've got to follow your dreams
and I hope they all come true sooner
or later for God only knows when but
oh how I'll miss you Until We Meet
Again, no I'll try not to cry but I'm
already misty eyed...you put your
finger on my lips and say shhhh let's
not say goodbye let's just say fare
thee well Angel eyes…well I love you
so much I will set you free 'cuz I'd
feel awful if you ever came to resent
me from following you’re the desires of
your heart and soul but still haven't
found yet so let your journey begin
I'll surely miss you my love, my friend
take care and you'll be in my prayers
Until We Meet Again, Until We Meet
Again!

Reviews

[Joshua Ramirez]

This hit me strongly since the words here describe the most contemporary incident for me that happened on Monday!
Although you have no discernible meter or organized stanzas from what I can see, you separate your stream of feelings with ellipses. It is interesting because I might use that when I write to others, but never in poetry. Good uniqueness.
I think you can add more imagery to this atmosphere of separation and rising hope.

Thank you for sharing.

[Bo Lanier]

glad u liked it...thx for reading my poem.