We Can be Heros (working title)
A Book by Mr New Writer
 A boy wakes up in a strange room with no memories he meets strange individuals soon he is entangled in a web of lies and conspiracy. will he trust the man who saved his life or the girl he loves.  © 2014 Mr New Writer
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Sorry for the poor spelling and grammar, I'm mainly looking for notes on dialogue, character progression and the like
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Im not a story person but the premise looks very intriguing.
I read the prologue and it does leave the reader with enough questions to want to read on.
If this is your first then you have a good natural talent for storytelling imho.
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Yay first comment!!
thank's for taking the time out to read my work and to comment.
its .. read moreYay first comment!!
thank's for taking the time out to read my work and to comment.
its only very early in the process im hoping to get a few more chapters out before writers block or complainantcy sets in.
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9 Years Ago
good idea - now you ight be a bit enthused go DO IT! lol
you're welcome Mr NW
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9 Years Ago
**might not ight
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Mr New WriterCanberra, Australia
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I'm a new writer working on my first piece if work. I have tried my hand at writing in the past but this is my passion so I have decided to put everything into my new novel idea.
Ha get it novel Id.. more..
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