Click

Television soul

burdened by surface imagery

entitled to these associations

as reality slides

across the bottom of the screen.

 

Chew

cow-like entranced

there must be something

I can do to stop this

ah, a sitcom

that's more like it.

 

I grasp but never hold

it is my right,

my blessed freedom

to rant and rage

wait

I too can be saved

 

Redemption passes by

like tumbleweeds in my mind

I see pretty plastic people

out of the corner of my eye

this might just pacify

for a while.

Reviews

[Too Me]

wow, you speak volumes with these words ~ Lana

[FuMiko]

I really liked it. The entire look on it was very interesting, and the flow was really very nice. At a glance it's almost a little too mechanical, but that was hardly a flaw.
Kudos,
-Izumiko

[Shadow]

To scientific to specific it's a bore, and it is also tedious to read through. I found it uninteresting,and so detailed that when I try to imagine what you were writing about, the meaningless words got in the way.