Dreams

Dreams

A Poem by Dylan Cook

 Dreams destroyed

 Dreams enjoyed

 Some last forever

 Some aren't discovered

 

 Dark, deceptive prophecies

 Enlightened ones fighting for peace

 Different though they be

 They flow into the same sea

 

 Dreams destroyed

 Dreams enjoyed

 Some last forever

 Some aren't discovered

 

Angels flying in the blushing sky

Demons causing people to die

Life and death forever in a struggle

It's sometimes too much to juggle

 

 Dreams destroyed

 Dreams enjoyed

 Some last forever

 Some aren't discovered

© 2009 Dylan Cook


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Loved the repetitive part:
Dreams destroyed
Dreams enjoyed
Some last forever
Some aren't discovered
Excellent imagery: Angels flying in the blushing sky
Dream on ...
LeeLee

Posted 15 Years Ago


I like the idea, especially the second stanza, but I think you could dig deeper and provide a much more in-depth piece that will be a bit more memoriable to the reader. Not bad overall though. Kudos.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on October 17, 2009