love! love... love?

love! love... love?

A Poem by LiliaRose
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do we really want, need or deserve love

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do we really want "love"

do we really know what "love" is

do we really deserve "love"

do we really care about "love"

do we really need "love"

do we really know how to "love"

when will i meet the person i "love"

when will i truly "love"

when will  i care about "love"

will i ever "love"

will i ever meet my "love"

will i ever know what "love" really is

did we make "love" up

did "love" ever exist

did i ever feel "love"

Love!

Love...

Love?

are you confused about love too?

 

© 2011 LiliaRose


Author's Note

LiliaRose
this is true im so confused about "love"! if it even exists!!

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Love it! Can I join ur confusion club!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The format is very very creative.. I like the last line as a question..looking forward to reading more of your work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Don't be so pessimistic! You should listen John Lennon. "Love" is not a cliched word.
Definitely the pattern of this poem speaks your confusion. This I should say a very critical yet talented piece of poetry! Keep it up!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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LiliaRose
LiliaRose

non ya



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