Searching (Poem)

Searching for ideas!

I've been stressing myself out for an idea to write about

I've been walking for hours outside during the sunrise and sunset, hoping it pops out

Always riding on the swings at the park while smoking for no reason

A disturbing feeling inside of me like I've committed treason

I never knew how it would feel to not have an idea in my head

It's just that I've always had one and not having to crazily lay in bed 

If this sounds dumb and weird, I'm sorry

I didn't expect it to be cool and adventurous like the safari

But all this time it didn't occur to me that poetry is about spilling ones emotions and thoughts

Not ruining the fun by planning beforehand like it's going to be a plot

So here I am... pouring my heart out to you 

Because it's something that I'm starting to do

Reviews

[richieb]

Mr. Writer,
Very creative with a dash of be-bop to bring it all around. Accurate description of torturing one self to write a rhyme. We all do it and in the end it pays-off. Good write.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you RichieB! :)

[Chase Dylan]

You have captured everyday plotting, thinking, and moping... Oh so well... I have found myself here many a time... Keep pouring, and pouring, and pouring, friend... Nonchalantly penned...

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much Silente!! :) I really appreciate it man.
Sometimes, pouring our heart out is the best thing t do

[Chase Dylan]

^^Agreed, you are most welcome...

[B]

I pour out of my chair
lol
i love how natural it feels
Really well done

[Mr.Writer]

Lol thank you Solo! ;P

[BBP]

I feel ya, I got stuck on my chapter to my book so I started knocking out poems like crazy! Hoping to inspire my characters to wake the f**k up! lol

[Mr.Writer]

Lol XD thank you so much!

[Arvad Lazar]

Great. I've "Actually" been walking for hours outside during the sunrise and sunset, hoping it pops out :D

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you lol, xD

[Mel Jayne]

Relatable hahaha. Nice poem, i like the imagery of smoking as this corruption to the childhood represented by the swing set. Nice work.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Mel! :) :D Lol, yeah I kinda meant for it to be like that :)

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

You know, if you are looking for some inspirations... im looking to collab with some one new all the time, if you wish to pick at my brain and I at yours then let me know, send me a message, I have alot of ideas!

[Mr.Writer]

Hey Sir Drift! :) Yeah for sure! I would love to collab with you for sure!
Thank you for asking!

[Cœur]

I'm not very good at writing reviews, but this is a very nice piece nonetheless. There is so much personality and feeling in it. Poems these days have so much fakeness in them, but yours seems so real. Very good job.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Couer! That's really nice of you! I'm glad you liked it!

[Charlotte]

1 is smoking a good idea 2 have fun following your haert and cant i come on this warlk with you?

[Mr.Writer]

Umm, I kinda just added smoking in there tbh but it doesn't have much relation except the feeling that you get from it, which I kinda did :)
For sure Charlotte :D you can come

[Charlotte]

thanks you!

[Mr.Writer]

Lol.. no problem? :D

[Charlotte]

smiles!!!!

[Hiru]

Haha. Nicely written. Most of the time what i do is spilling out my emotions at the exact moment and it ends up being a free verse.! And here this is you being like that.! Even though you don't have anything to write,the way you've expressed that blank minded moment is really cool. You are talented indeed.!

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Hiru!! That's very kind of you :) Lol, I know, same! My poem also turns out as a free verse after trying to spread out my emotions on it :D

[Hiru]

You are welcome.! :) but your free verse is cool right?

[Mr.Writer]

Yeah :) ;)