Relish (Poem)

Relish, relish, enjoy...

           "Try to be happy

                      Enjoy life to the fullest

         Before you lose it..."

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Great wisdom shared and I agree. Life is shorter than we think. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[CAPOLAVORO]

Good one. You really like themes like this one. Keep it up. :)

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much!

[Zephyr]

Its so true.
Simple, powerful and deep.
Keep writing!

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you! :)

[matrixmark]

I like how you colour coded this piece.
The end line in Black.....clever.

Once again Shaan

Good work.

Mark.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Mark! :) I appreciate it

[matrixmark]

Tell me, was it your intention to have the colours as they were.

Mark.

[Mr.Writer]

Umm, not really tbh Mark :)

[Mr.Writer]

Have you checked out Run boy :)

[matrixmark]

But if you look at it - Green - peace and happiness
Red - Have fun, live life to the max
Black - Death

See it now.

Mark.

[Mr.Writer]

Oh! I felt like I just choose those colors randomly, but you showed the meanings and that they matched with each phrase.
Thank you Mark!

[matrixmark]

Not a problem.

Mark.

[zaisham9393]

Beautiful poem and so very true indeed..
Thank you for sharing :)!

[Mr.Writer]

No problem Zaisham :)

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you :)

[zaisham9393]

You are very welcome Mr.Writer :)!

[Kesha]

Beautiful, simple lines, it's true.. enjoy life while you still have it

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Kesha! :)

[Kesha]

You're welcome!

[Surya]

Yeah, beautiful lines..I agree and I did enjoyed..:)

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Surya!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Good one with a good meaning...

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Farhan!

[Najam Us Saher]

I wonder how people can write such meaningful and thoughtful haikus. Well done.

[Mr.Writer]

Awe thank you Najam!! :)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome ☺

[Stacy Purvis]

I love Cherry Blossoms...I have a tattoo of them on my back w/Kanji for "Love".
This is a lovely haiku. Some haikus are Senyrus, too, but they're all haikus to me.
Do you enjoy Canada? I've been many times, and I enjoyed every visit.

[Mr.Writer]

Lol cherry blossoms are amazing! Yeah, Canada is a lukewarm atmosphere that is always welcoming! Many attractions as well!! :)

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Anastasia :)