The moment (Poem)

My hands violently tremble

as I hold a bottle of pills

Ready to be swallowed

All in one gulp

My adrenaline rushes

rushes so fast

that I can't feel anything

no more

The cap opens

as the pills come out

And I pop one into my mouth

Then, the rest of them

I fall back

onto the floor

unable to breathe

tears crashing down

Inhaling and exhaling I try

try not to think about it

my eyes tightly closed

waiting for the moment to happen

Reviews

[Surya]

More a story than a poem...It's descriptive Shaan..I liked it..:)

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Surya! :)

[Zephyr]

I visualized the whole thing reading your poem:)
I think you can be a master story teller!
But pills are no solution. This is an informative poem too:)
Great work,Shaan:)

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much Neetha! :)