I see you in them (Poem)

Dawn approaches

the sky darker than ever

and then they come...

Thousands of stars resting

illuminating the night sky

as they appear

I see you in them

smiling at me

from miles away

I make a wish

as you change

into a shooting star

Showing yourself

through it's image

lapping the sky

Going further away

to the universe

meeting other stars

Fading away to dawn

leaving me to wait for you;

once again

Reviews

[Zoya]

This is a lovely piece. There's very much more to the last line than it seems...how hard can it be...waiting for a loved one to return. Wonderful poem. Keep writing.

[Mr.Writer]

I agree Zoe
Thank you!! :)

[Zoya]

No problem

[Najam Us Saher]

I loved the imagery. Thank you for sharing this write. You have very well managed to write about stars and about your passion.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Najam!! :)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.☺

[Prashant Bajpai]

quite good keep writing!! i appreciate

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Prashant! :)

[Sofia]

This was so great! I loved it..it's truly amazing and fascinating..the lines were short and very well written..that's what I liked the most..thanx for sharing :)

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Sofia! :)
I really appreciate it

[Sofia]

Most welcome :)

[Joanna Matilda Barlow]

Now that was very touching. How did you come up with that? It sounded very deep.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Joanna!! :)
I came up with it while walking home last night, as I saw the stars and their beauty and thought about my amazing grandma. :)

[Joanna Matilda Barlow]

Awww! That's sweet. I would bet that she's smiling over it as we know it. She'd be tearing up for joy.

[Mr.Writer]

Thanks!!
I'm also sure she'd me smiling :)

[Zephyr]

You are such a creative poet Shaan:)
I absolutely adore your poems.
I loved the imagery you create.
Keep writing and sharing!!

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Neetha!! :)
I'm really glad you enjoy reading my poems! :)
It's really appreciated

[Zephyr]

Always a pleasure:)