M-E

lights are filled with emotion

music filled with heat

everlasting longing

of how you felt to me

my fingers touch the universe

alone on one big stage

i tremble with the rhythm

i feel it everyday

i close my eyes to the madness

so i can feel it in my bones

i pray the dawn will never come

as i dance here all alone

13.3.04

Reviews

[Timeless-Chan]

really great ryhme to this! really great:)

[Alicia Beavis]

The i's need to be capitalised but otherwise, lovely piece. It had a nice, consistent rhythm and the rhyme wasn't too bad either! Nice.