7:58 am

7:58 am

A Poem by mabel mae

to try is
the biggest mistake 
one can make.

© 2024 mabel mae


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There’s a real lesson in this.

I’m drawn to the famous lines on Bukowski’s grave of “don’t try” and I’ve often pondered what that really means.

I think it comes down to the idea of hope, which can be just as dangerous as trying itself. But I’m also realising that forcing things, rather than letting them unfold in a way that is natural and is within the flow of how things are supposed to progress can also be detrimental to life.

This makes a person think for so few lines and I really appreciated the brevity of the statement.

Thank you

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I wholeheartedly agree! When we try we have implied failure. Do or do not, but don't waste time trying.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

There’s a real lesson in this.

I’m drawn to the famous lines on Bukowski’s grave of “don’t try” and I’ve often pondered what that really means.

I think it comes down to the idea of hope, which can be just as dangerous as trying itself. But I’m also realising that forcing things, rather than letting them unfold in a way that is natural and is within the flow of how things are supposed to progress can also be detrimental to life.

This makes a person think for so few lines and I really appreciated the brevity of the statement.

Thank you

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

No dear I must correct you. When stuff goes wrong, you must do your best to resolve it. Only losers give up 🌹

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mabel mae

3 Weeks Ago

always pleased to find a visit from you chris.
like roses in a garden, your words are sharp b.. read more
"7:58" - not a good time to be doing heavy lifting or deep thinking. only if it turns out badly. no pain no gain however.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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mabel mae
mabel mae

nowhere, IA



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hi i’m mabel and i have been writing poetry for quite some time now. if you wish to keep reading, i must have you know two things; 1. i’m not a real person, merely just a soul, and 2. i ha.. more..

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