The wait

Never confuse patience to be applicable in all situations it has limitations

You sympathise with the air beside you
And you become acquainted with your faith's due
And time before time passes you by
And time after time you are engulfed in your sigh
You tangle,you tumble, you smile but then you cry
Your wet tears,wet dreams, wet emotions never to dry
You then stare into nothingness and stare at your plate
Finally you understand what you create. .The wait!

You mimic why and shoot out your flare
Hoping everyone would be induced to care
But they will be twisted in their own wait
Never worried with what you might flirt
You then start to curse and curse till it becomes a flat verse
For tomorrow again you are yet to rehearse
Only to mingle with fate in a coming date
Only to try and understand your wait

A wait without prayer is just a waste of time
Its never lemon and lime, remove the lime
And with history and memory to wait could be wise
Could also be folly should evil suffice
And your thinking divorce fate,
though you could be steadfast and the future be a debate,
As you wait for love, happiness, joy, a testimony
Without will, God, prayer, all is but a felony
For your destiny might not be tied to the wait!

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"As you wait for love, happiness, joy, a testimony
Without will, God, prayer, all is but a felony
For your destiny might not be tied to the wait!"
Great wisdom in the words. Must open doors of the heart to know love and happiness. I like the above lines. To hold hate and misery near is a felony and a sin. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Mufaro Kudakwashe Joseph Mangono]

Love needs effort it does not happen magically, many people think life imitates movies or novels. Thank you for the review.

[Mufaro Kudakwashe Josep..]

Thank you for the review quite constructive :-)

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

An interesting concept with a strong message. I like the last stanza the best in terms of flow and emotion; seems that you found your feet with that one and it really packed a great punch. I think in general the flow was good, with a few little issues concerning grammar and wording, but I am guessing that English is your second language...perhaps? On a whole, this was quite enjoyable.

[Mufaro Kudakwashe Joseph Mangono]

thank you very much will work on it :-)