Life Hates us

Life Hates us

A Poem by Mustafa
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A journey we never realize until its all over

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The great human experience rises and falls.
 Some points you feel life is going to fast.
 Sometimes life feels like a sloth on a very bad day.
 One moment you are just a kid with not a care in a world.
 Life is endless, limitless, and beautiful. 
Without warning you are an age that makes you work for your existence.
 It confuses you at first.
 You wonder how life came by so fast.
 You still can not believe you are at this point.
 Time marches on.
 Little by little you are lagging behind Time 
struggling to be relevant in this world, 
Age becomes the shackles that prevents your existential freedom. 
You are on your deathbed wondering if your life was the best it can be.
 Regret riddles your body relentlessly till you die. 
There is no swan song for us humans.
 We exist to suffer. 
We suffer during our first moments  
Its only fitting that our end be just .

© 2011 Mustafa


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Time marches on.

Little by little you are lagging behind Time

struggling to be relevant in this world,

Age becomes the shackles that prevents your existential freedom
My faves in this nice well written poem...:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Its a really nice piece of writin.... keep it up..!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


I must agree with you. But somewhere in between the B.S we need to have some fun. I like to say. "Dance and sing in the streets making the people who want control think they have lost." A outstanding poem. Best defense is to never show defeat and leave the problem behind us in our dust. A excellent poem. You made me think.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


That is wonderful…
Very creative…


Posted 8 Years Ago



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