Only If

Only if
My heart was beating in one piece
Maybe I'd feel alive
After all I'm only tearing apart
Only if the sun will rise for me again

Only if
The dark would dimish
The light would return again
From my start to finish
I bleed the colors of the night

Only if
The sun would come again
Cleanse me with rain fall
Hear the angel's call
Only if my wings spread to let me fly

Only if
In the air I could fly
Instead I'm falling through the dark clouds
Plunging into deep waters I'm never coming out of
Only if I never took another breath

Reviews

[Lorraine]

It's very sad but tone you've used here sounds so much like a passive voice. The words depict strong emotions but the relaxed rhythm of the piece makes it seem like a surrender. That is a great irony, I guess. I'm not sure I'm making sense, but there's something quite contrasting in this poem of yours.

Keep Writing. ^___^

[r]

i like the intensity of the poem