beauty of solitude

Beauty Of Solitude

I was treading a path holding nature's hand,
to feel the breeze i sat on sand,
that was the time i did realize,
for my soul none other would suffice,
i loved being alone and i started loving it more..
and there i knocked solitude's door...

For i discovered it then,
a great surprise it was to me...how unlonely being alone can be...!!

Cause now to the world i can scream,
loneliness is where i visualize my dream.
As the time passes by,i am moving too..
I would love to be with the crowd..
        oh!! that's very true..
But for my tears i don't want to leave a space..
so solitude is the crowd i'll choose and embrace.

Look at the glory that lies within..
can work to you a sword,can even act a pin,
can act on you a wine intoxicating you of freedom..
can act a bitter tonic relieving you of boredom..

For against the world it alone stands so tall,
can still act a poison,
                                you may bang your head on wall..
Yet i choose it with all my will..
for i may bang my head on wall...
IT STILL WON'T KILL...!!

Reviews

[Cristy]

Truly enjoyed your poem of solitude.
"work to you a sword,can even act a pin,
can act on you a wine intoxicating you of freedom..
can act a bitter tonic relieving you of boredom.." and the opening line were my favorite! Keep it up :)