young again

just talking about love and how it keeps us young and full of life

like a child climbing up the stairs

with giggles and laughters everywhere

like a beautiful rose bend over with the breeze

like stars sparkling in blue sky so clear

that’s exactly how i feel

you with your words had brought my spring

in the time i thought it’s for the wind

pour yourself all over me

mark your territory

here in your arms as safe as i can be

i’m filled with glory

let your love slip into my soul

just for once more

let it clear my heart from pain

let me live all over again

i'm young again

Reviews

[Stephen]

Start the line with "Capital" letters rather than small and always use "Capital "I" instead of using Small "i" ..these're just minor errors. Overall's good. I love the rhyme, you've gripped. Am glad to see you feel "Young Again" Hope, you stay ever Young and beautiful as an angel. This poem's come from your heart which's expressing your feelings of about love.

Keep on!

[nancy.sedky]

Thank you Stephen...how sad i just saw your comment, thank you and i will try to keep your tips on mind ..thank you :)