Blue and Red

Blue and Red

A Poem by alltheloveabove

What would I know about love

When you mark her with bruises instead of kisses?

© 2014 alltheloveabove


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This is marvelous I love it! However left as a sentence I think you are lacking in this analogies true potential, I would like to see you extend this piece :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


I like the contrast and analogies here , dear Jina...Blue and red are so high colors and so intense, the really create good surrealistic art. Very good thought-poem, marked with the expectation and need for love, overcome by the blue reality. I hope most of people know about love, thought :)

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Posted 5 Years Ago



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alltheloveabove
alltheloveabove

Geneva, Switzerland



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Hi everyone :) My name is Jina Kim and I am more of a spontaneous writer, scribbling, or rather typing away furiously until I click 'submit.' Thank you for the reads and the reviews, it's highly app.. more..

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