Unpolished Perfection

Unpolished Perfection                 Unpolished perfection A jewel in the rough Seeking approval And the going is tough   A full length mirror Brings sorrow to the girl The vision she sees Sends her mind in a whirl   Scraped is her spirit Lonely is she Wrapped in emotion She can’t let it be   Lamentations commence Her cries catch in her throat At this point in time She’s no queen on her float   Breaking the pattern She has to remain strong Scrape fat from her plate So she can belong   An alphabet of reasons Causes her to abate Her mirror image sings out You must lose this weight   The pitch in her voice Rises to the breaking point Her full length mirror She will not disappoint   Six weeks of denial Took inches away Her figure in curved Now she carries a bouquet   She rides on her float Queen for a day Landed a dreamboat Her smile is here to stay

 

Reviews

[~Mary Ann~]

There are many out there that can relate to this piece... yours truly included at times!
The title caught my attention and then the graphics... but your words put it all together... and made it unquie and creative. Unpolished perfection is honest... thoughtful.. and capped with a very bright ending.

Great ink! :)

[darkgurl]

This is very well written and can relate to this, A very creative write as well....Kim