Haiku Whom Do You Seek?

Haiku Whom Do You Seek

You’re seeking refuge

 

When emotions wreak havoc

Heart is set on edge

 

 

Whispers in the night

Hopelessness within your mind

Call upon a name

 

 

 

But whom do you seek

When night shadows hover round

One who eases fear

 

 

 

Who can end all fear

As you fall on bended knee

In heaven or earth

 

 

 

God calls back the fear

In the twinkling of an eye

Reborn into light

Reviews

[Bull Dog]

This gets a Cool Cool Beans rating

[whimzygirl]

Very well written.

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wow fantastic haiku write

[Steve H]

Wow very nice! I find Haikus pretty difficult so this is extremely impressive to me!
I never would have thought to put Haikus together to make a whole, but it works really well :) good job

[Poeticpiers]

nice haiku string M lady revealing your faith openly

Like doubting Thomas
I lack the ability
to blindly believe