Through my Eyes

Sunsets, snow events, rushing brooks Deepened thoughts, peering looks  The beauty escapes our eyes each day  The words, and thoughts that slip away Under every darkened cloud Is a magic that awaits I choose to take the time to see Before it all eludes and flees Through snapshots taken thoughts provoke  Words repeated but seldom spoke A moments flutter, snap of the shutter Expressive words portray the thought swished away but not forgot

Reviews

[paddy d daly]

your words flow so well almost to the end(sorry). I always relate poetry with painting and
photography, painting pictures in the mind and capturing moments in time,
enjoyed the read.

[Frieda P]

Good reminder, nicely pen'd. I tripped over that last line a bit, perhaps 'but not forgotten'. Enjoy'd.

[Nancy Martin]

Hello Frieda, Thanks for the helpful review. I agree so much with the last line correction.Thanks Crimsonette

[Frieda P]

You're very welcome, I enjoyed it.

[Gracie G]

Your words are very beautiful. I also enjoy photography, and there's something so powerful about being able to capture a moment. Good job.

[Nancy Martin]

Hello Gracie, Thank you so much for the review. Your kind words are appreciated. Crimsonette