Poetry Exercise #1, Take 2

Poetry Exercise #1, Take 2

A Poem by Naomi Bloom
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A poem modeled after William Carlos Williams' poem The Red Wheelbarrow.

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so much depends upon 

the beat of a drum


a haunting synthesizer

ostinato


a devlish, complex guitar 

riff


and a raspy yet clear voice whispering notes

into your ear

© 2013 Naomi Bloom


Author's Note

Naomi Bloom
A writing exercise for a poetry class.

We wrote with this template in mind, a poem by William Carlos Williams:

so much depends
upon

a red wheel
barrow

glazed with rain
water

beside the white
chickens.

This is the second of my many attempts to imitate this form.

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Naomi Bloom
Naomi Bloom

Ontario, Canada



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An amateur writer of poems, short stories and other types of writing. I recently graduated from university and I am trying to figure out what to do with my life. Victorian England, name meanings, be.. more..

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