Obsession

Obsession

A Poem by Naomi Bloom

I spend all my time thinking about him until I see him face to face

and suddenly he is absolutely repulsive

I can’t look at him anymore

I find all his bad qualities

His bad habits when performing

Mistakes

And I wonder why I loved him


But my feelings don’t change a whit

because when he leaves I can’t bear to be separated from him

Not see him for another day, another week

And I feel a dagger in my heart

A kick when I’m sprawled out on the floor, bleeding

As he walks down the stairs with her

They hold hands in their minds

for even though they do not touch I can feel their bodies connect

Never think he is staring at you

Across the room

Unless it is obvious

© 2013 Naomi Bloom


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Wow...so much feeling in this poem. "The hold hands in their minds, for even though thy do not touch I can feel their bodies connect"...I love this wording.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Naomi Bloom

10 Years Ago

Thanks! :)

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Naomi Bloom
Naomi Bloom

Ontario, Canada



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An amateur writer of poems, short stories and other types of writing. I recently graduated from university and I am trying to figure out what to do with my life. Victorian England, name meanings, be.. more..

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