Girl that was never loved

Girl that was never loved

A Poem by angel gone bad
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this is about some girl that dose not want to live but getts what she wants but no0one care that she is not dead and that she has gone out of the world

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She comes out the room

She comes down the stairs

She come into the kitchen

She takes the knife AAAAAHHHHHH

 

Her mum screams 

Her daughter falls to the floor

Blood pouring from her arm

She sees the scar's on her arms

 

How could she do this

How can she not tell

Why was she like this

Why did she not lean

 

You are better than that

You can live the rest of your life

Why did you do it

Why did u not tell

 

She did it

With no reason

Not thinking

Why did she not think

 

Why was she like this sort of person, did she not learn, did she not think about what she Was doing.

 

 

 

WHY WAS SHE LIKE THIS SORT OF PERSON,DID SHE NOT LEARN,DID SHE NOT THINK ABOUT WHAT SHE WAS DOING.

 

 

Maybe she wanted to die before she died a diffrent

iIwalked up to her bedroom and there she lay dead as she could be

Dead to the world with no-one to come and say that they loved her to say they missed Her to say that she was the best thing that happend

 

THAT WAS THE END OF THAT GIRL THAT WAS NEVER LOVED

 

 

 

© 2010 angel gone bad


Author's Note

angel gone bad
ignore the spelling problems if any
and also jst how u like it

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People who seek love always seem to have
the same problem.
First you love then you get love.
If you just want someone, try again, try loving
someone. Commit to that person, think of that
person and what you can do for them.
It is the same as "getting". If we would "get"
we must first give without thought of what we
get. Then one day we will awake to find we have
received.
Your poem is well received, it is genuine, it is
heartfelt and honest, it is also well written.
Only the philosophy remains in question.
----- Eagle Cruagh

Posted 8 Years Ago


Thanks :)


Posted 8 Years Ago


I really like the way this poem flows and the imagery. Great job.

Posted 8 Years Ago


lol u can but thanks glad that u like it hun

Posted 9 Years Ago


i love the angry repeating thing going on
ending sentence very powerful.....keep it up...im not going all technical lol

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on March 16, 2010
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angel gone bad
angel gone bad

peterborough, United Kingdom



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