The end of the new start

The end of the new start

A Poem by angel gone bad

Running though the dark forbidding house

Running from what was comeing

Her not knowing what to do

 

She stopped for a breath and she heard a sound

Turned and there it was walking to her the darkness

The darkness for comeing to her comeing to take her away

Coming to destory what her and her power worked for

 

This was the end of a new start this was he end

This was the end for what she want to do with her life

This was the end of what she live to do

 

As it got closer she could feel the the darkness

She could tell that she was going to die

As it got closer she could feel the heat from it's body

She could feel the power of the darkness

 

She knew that this was the end of the new start

© 2010 angel gone bad


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thanks alot yea that is what i was trying to get across to the reader when they are reading it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Interesting, no problems as far as I can see but I'm only one person with one opinion. I like how you wrote this, and the idea behind it. Kind of like the darkness was death coming to take her life away. And she knew it although she runs, trying to escape it's clutches without sucess. Great job.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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