Save Me

It is official, I do not know anything anymore

But if I have to be honest, did I ever really?

I've been playing with fire, but the flames are getting too big

I'm losing all balance, in the world that is this slippy floor

And I can feel thunder screaming on the inside

As the rain is violently pouring in my heart

Only my own poison is floating in my veins now

What's left is a cold body, where selfness and pain collide

Only in your arms I could feel home

Reviews

[Robyn]

As the rain is violently pouring in my heart

i especially loved that line, it really captures that lost feeling that you are experiencing..

and the last line...wow!! that ties it all together nicely! great work with this!

[Elliot Kyron]

Absolutely stunning. The way you've written it, you can feel the emotions in yourself. The flow and metaphors are perfect too. I really loved it. Thank you for sharing.