Brain Dead

This is serious. I don't seem to be able to write at all today. It makes me feel crappy.

Gaah!

I don't know what to write!

I've run out of topics!

I don't know where to turn!

This is horrible,

Watching myself struggle with words.

It's traitorous,

Not being able to vent!

All I want to do is write!

But I can't!

This is not good!

Even my words don't come out right!

Why?????
Aah!

I have no idea what to put here!
All because I'm...

All beacause I'm...

All because I'm...

BRAIN DEAD!!!!

Reviews

[Vannah]

I agree, but its kinda hard for me to go brain dead...i to come to a blank when it comes to tests some times but other than that ideas are always floating in my head it actually so bad that it takes me almost two hours to go to bed half the time unless i just ran 4 miles (which would probably never happen)....
Now back to the poem i love it!
Brain Dead is a much better than saying writers block....

[Voltaire Mephisto (aka ..]

When I first looked at it I was confused. It seemed written by someone scatterbrained. I guess that is why it's called Braindead. I appreciate the artsy, detached way it was written.

This is good! You touched on my feelings right now! I can't seem to write! I like the structure! Very good!

This is better than a lot of stuff I have read here. Seriously.

Good form, good choice of words, well imparted message.

a good piece

[Sarah]

Isn't this just the worst feeling in the world?!?! Writers block is seriously the most frustrating thing ever, because you feel completely helpless. o-o; I definitely sensed your frustration throughout this piece, and the chaotic way in which this poem was set up added to that effect. So great job creating something lovely, even with writers block! :)

[Antoinette]

Yes, thank you, I've been there before and I know the frustration of it! How awesome that you could write about not being able to write, very poetic. And while reading it I actually felt the irritation, I love when a poem can make me actually feel something. You have created such a vivid view of this horrible moment when we have become...brain dead. You have done an awesome job!

[RHEA CROSLEY]

Cleaver but I can't remember why I think I am brain dead?