"Two-Faced"

"Two-Faced"

You're such a genius
you made me believed.
I still remember the way you talked-
A certified poet with flowery words
Such a perfect pretender-
Sick of trying to be up front
while hiding beneath cover.
How come I didn't notice?
That everything was a trap
I was blinded by your charm
And I Let you fool me around
But now finally it's over
You're true colour was revealed. 

Reviews

[paparapapa]

It's really painful when we open ourselves to a certain person and then we'll learn later on that this person never reciprocated. That he was actually wearing a mask. It makes us pessimistic when it comes to trusting people. I loved how you described that person. Comparing him to a poet was also a smart move. Really good job on this one. Keep on writing. :)

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Never a poet but my ex husband was
a pretender toxic his true colors came
out after 17 years was painful but it always
makes us stronger. Powerful piece thank you for sharing.

[natzky]

you can relate well with the poem, ma'am benita..hehehe..anyways, you're very much welcome..thank you for commenting and reading my work of art:)

[Riddhi]

Really nice poem..There are numerous people around us who have two - faces ,they pretend to be something else and they are actually not like that....I indeed loved the theme of this poem..
Keep on writing and thanks for sharing...
Take care..
Riddhi

[natzky]

thank you for the time reading my work Ms. Riddhi..you may review my newly published poems..ahahaha..thank you, I am very much open for any suggestions for the betterment of my work.:)

[Riddhi]

I will try to do and actually you too can try to review some of my poems!!!!

[Gee]

Many like this in the world, as a youngster I could've charmed the knickers of a nun, thank God I never stumbled across one. Many a frog to Kiss for most before they find their Prince ( or princess)
Enjoyed the read Nat

[natzky]

ahahaha..exactly, Gee..poor me I've encountered a lot..ahahahaha..but it's fine, part of growing up..:)

[Gee]

Indeed it is. Got it all to go through with my now near 17 year old daughter.......Just loading the shotgun !!!

[natzky]

ahahahahah...lolz..talk to your daughter well...need not to load the shotgun..lolz

[chuna]

I love the poem and the picture..
perfect pretender...hmm...

[zainul]

Exposed the face of a cheat very nicely.
Good write.

[Colleen a Bean]

I like it but I'm sorry he was such a jerk.

[natzky]

yeah....right...thanks a lot for the comment...:)heheh

[Colleen a Bean]

lol ya no problem haha

[frozensakura]

great poem i like it... it reminds me of someone i know. thanks for sharing

[Harley (arbiter)]

I like it! I can relate a little too. How people don't really show their true self and they lie to make everything sound good. Also I love the picture. Itchigo kurosaki. (Did I spell that right?) I love that show. Lol. Great write!

[natzky]

thanks mike for your comments I really appreciate it..heheh...mike(FC)

[Michael X]

spellbound by dream, happens to the best of open hearts, the form works
great to create the powerful sense of underlying pain, artistically expressed