My Red balloon

My Red balloon

A Poem by Nawodi de silva
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This is about the someone I met. He went away like a balloon by giving only his memories

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There was a red balloon

Caught my eyes tightly

Couldn't take my eyes off

When I saw the red balloon

 

It was so cute and light 

Trying to go up and up

So many little fellows

Fought to have

But I didn't want to be a one of them

Kept that attractive balloon

With my memories

 

While I was walking to home

Found that someone is following me

It was my little red balloon

I caught it

Oh….oh….“now you are  mine”

My sweet red balloon 

You are mine

 

Played with you

Danced with you

I was so happy with you

You were my red balloon

 

My little light red balloon

I’m sorry....

I couldn't hold you tight

You went away

My red balloon you went away

I cried ... cried.. lot

But you didn't come back

As you were far away with another one

But you are still my red loving balloon

I miss you...my little red balloon....

 

© 2012 Nawodi de silva


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Omg I loved it! I like how you could protray such strong feelings about just a balloon. It also seems like the poem is from a child's p.o.v.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Nawodi de silva

7 Years Ago

Thank you for your review Terra..:)
Terra

7 Years Ago

No problem
 Nawodi de silva

7 Years Ago

:)

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 Nawodi de silva
Nawodi de silva

Kegalle, Sri Lanka



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Actually I'm not a good writer.But I can't let a blank page remain as it is.my heart says to write.so i'm writing everything my heart ask me to.these are my writings and hope you will enjoy by reading.. more..

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