FEELINGS OUT

AM I RIGHT

AM I WRONG

GOOD INTENTION TURNED UPSIDE DOWN

VERY FAULTY

NO WHERE NEAR SALTY

CANT LET THEM TOUCH US

THIS IS THE PLIGHT

FRIEND OR ENEMY

LOVE OR HATE

WE ARE THE ONE TO CHOSE

WE ARE SUPERIOR

WE ARE IN CONTROL

WE ARE ONE

Reviews

[BlackPrince]

I like the poem.
But, I wonder, why didn't you put punctuations like full stops, question marks.
And what's up with the capital letters?
I suggest, as friendly advice from a fellow poet and writer, you take your writing more seriously and start writing properly with capital letters only put where they should be; and pay attention to writing in proper sentences with the proper grammar and vocabulary.

WELL DONE ANYWAY

[lessa (kenzie)]

This is so truthful, so well said