Bewitching

bewitching, enthralling, inventive, silver, hellion, epic

Her silver eyes were bewitching to me

as she chased out the young hellions, including myself

i felt that this was so very enthralling, she is a rare beauty

 

i asked myself an inventive question, why was i so drawn to her?

her long flowing black hair and gleaming eyes

i felt this was the beggining of an epic story

because she was not normal

she was a witch

Reviews

[Searching 4 Serenity]

Beware of the witch. For she will fool a blind man with her unfailing gaze. She will belittled you.

[Poetic Beauty]

This is short but has good details. You could expand this if you wanted to and make it a grand story of a witch. You caught my attention I want to know more about the black haired abnormal woman.