the promise.

the promise.

A Poem by Vanessa

Created on March 24, 2009. This was originally for a grade, but I liked what I created so much that I copied it on a separate sheet of paper. (:


Forever I said, forever it shall be.
The promise is held in the palm of our hand.
When I see thy eye,
I lie in petals of thoughts.
Your eyes like a bright,
lush green meadow,
speckled with golden flowers.

With your smile and with your heart, til the May of our end.
Mine, yours, our promise is to never hurt one another.
A promise is like a key of trust;
millions are made,

thousands are lost or broken,
hundreds are kept.
You'll never know how dear you are to me,
but our promise is forever and I'll never let it go.
Forever I said,
forever it shall be.

© 2011 Vanessa

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Added on November 13, 2010
Last Updated on January 6, 2011



Tampa, FL

hi, the name's nessa. i found out about this website through my friend Justin Street. after you check out my works, i highly recommend you go check out his works. you won't be disappointed. (: Don't.. more..

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