Why the crying?

Why the crying?

A Poem by sarah
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About the world's sadness

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The sky is crying
Why is it crying
Is it sad 
Is it mad
At me
Or at the world
At the people who hurt
At the kids that slowly dying 
Why is it crying
Why are they dieing
I'm asking 
Please answer me
please hear the crying
I'm hearing it
Why can't you
Their hearts slowly dying 
Their souls loudly  crying
Why arent you hearing 
The screaming when there dying  
The heartbreak when they're crying 
I can and I'm slowly dieing 

© 2014 sarah


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sarah
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Very sad, the emotion well express and well presented.

Posted 9 Years Ago


sarah

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much
great work! such a good read :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sarah

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much was it really good
Jamie

9 Years Ago

Yeah I love it :)
I read between the lines and it states the shape our world is in no one hears the weeping of the meek and I remember it They shall inherit the earth The Lord with hear their crying and answer their prayers. I tell you what you have written here is a wake up call for all to see what they should pay attention to is the cry of the meek. Blessings Oh Blessed writer.

Posted 9 Years Ago


sarah

9 Years Ago

Thanks so much

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Added on November 14, 2014
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sarah
sarah

jeddah, Saudi Arabia



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i wonder i wonder

A Poem by sarah