A place I can go

A place I can go

A Poem by .nicole.

I want a place I can go.

And no one will know my name.

Where I can start over, and be who I want to be.

I could be a band geek or someone popular.

 

I want a place I can go.

Where it is just me.

And others don' t bother to talk.

I could just sit and think.

 

I want a place I can go.

Where there is no where,

And the streets have no names.

I could wander aimlessly forever but no be lost.

 

I want a place I can go.

And you will be there.

Where you will wait forever.

And be happy for me.

 

I want a place I can go.

Where I wont be judged.

And no one would hurt me.

I could actually show the world what I feel.

 

I want a place I can go.

© 2009 .nicole.


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I really like this and that has a lot to do with the fact that I can relate. Sometimes you just want to run away, leave everything behind start fresh, but where do you go? The words flow well and I really like the second verse:
"I want a place I can go.
Where it is just me.
And others don' t bother to talk.
I could just sit and think."
Nice job. Thanks for sharing.


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I really like this and that has a lot to do with the fact that I can relate. Sometimes you just want to run away, leave everything behind start fresh, but where do you go? The words flow well and I really like the second verse:
"I want a place I can go.
Where it is just me.
And others don' t bother to talk.
I could just sit and think."
Nice job. Thanks for sharing.


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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