Jump

Just jump,

Nothing bad could happen.

Yes.

Yes, I promise.

Just jump.

*sigh*

Close your eyes.

One

Two

Three

JUMP

...

No you aren't going to get hurt.

This time will be diffrent.

*sigh*

You can do this,

Look, everyone else is.

You will be fine.

No.

Yes.

Maybe.

You want me to count again?

*rolls eyes*

Ready?

Why not?

You will be fine.

Nothing is going to hurt you.

Yes I will save you.

Don't think, just jump.

One

Two

Thr...

And why can't I count for you?

Riiiight.

 

JUST
JUMP

Author's Note

What are you jumping into?

Reviews

[The Perfectionist]

No. No I will not jump.

An amusing and interesting poem which doubles as a lovely transcription applicable in a lot of situations.

One thing. I normally suggest avoiding punctuation in poetry, but above all, be consistent. You've used periods everywhere else; don't leave them out of the last two lines.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is kind of cute, but also very serious at the same time.
Yes, we should look before we leap. Wise....very wise.