why?

why?

A Poem by catherine julia<3
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it just asks why about alot of stuff about what i have been thinking about

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why cant i trust?

why cant i care?

why cant i feel the love in the air?

why do i have to run?

why cant i have a little fun?

why cant i fall for you?

why cant i see about how poeple feel?

why cant they realize what is real?

why cant does this have to be the real me for who i see

 

© 2009 catherine julia<3


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nice work you should try practicing using moor jucy words rather then plain ordnary words

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Posted 15 Years Ago
Who knows all the answers to every why question there is
Well said

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Posted 15 Years Ago
Why.Sometimes we never can know the answers.
Its depressing in itself.
Nice write.

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Posted 15 Years Ago

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catherine julia<3

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