Tears Of The Devil

Hate anger and fear

Feelings you get when my name you hear

 

Stories about me you've been told

The same cold stories, same old, same old

 

You never change, you never listen

To my side of those stories, my vision

 

I chose the wrong card even though I had it all

The choice wasn't hard but my pride caused me my soul

 

God ordered me to bow for a human

A creature made of clay

But I was made of fire so I ran

And my torture was then delayed

 

God created hell to torture me

So this world will forever be

Divided into good and evil

And I was meant to be the greatest devil

 

But I couldn't stand to suffer on my own

Revenge was all I wanted so I chose humans to be my toys 

Play them and mess up with their bright minds

So the pleasure of a group torture I could find

 

It's painful what I go through everyday

Knowing one choice ruined my heavens way 

Created of fire I drain watered tears

I cry loudly but no one my screams will ever hear

 

Yes, I made a huge mistake

But my regret is real never fake

 Yes, sins I help you do

Because when I had my chance the wind blew

 Yes, I am broken and weak

But a way to hell I will help you seek

 No, don't feel sorry for me

Because I'm a heartless demon and I will forever be

 

I'll be there for you to take what you made me lose

To leave you with no choice to choose

Heaven is far for you to dream

Hell is where you belong, in my theme

Reviews

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

For a rhyming piece, this one flowed quite well for me (not usually my favorite style)...I think it is because you broke up the flow of it and changed the scheme from time to time. This has a warning nature to it that I quite enjoyed. A few little things...maybe some issue with word choice (it's hard with a rhyming piece to use the most powerful words because you're constrained by the rules) and phrasing, but overall a well thought out piece. Keep writing!

[beautiful dreamer]

love the ryhme!